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My Worst Day Ever

My presentation of Lions,Buffalos and Crocodiles

It was the best afternoon ever in July the 13th. My herd and I were walking to the amazing lake called Savannah lake in Africa. We went to the lake to drink water before the next walk. I was playing with my two best friends called Jim and Max, and they were taller and older than me. Until Dad came and told me to stay with him incase something would happen.  Luckily my dad told me to stay with him because I was about to meet my worst enemies.

I was thinking about the day that I would hear and meet my worst enemy.  But then my dad saw a herd of lions and we ran away. When the lions saw us run away they started to chase my herd away. I was so frightened that I would die. The herd of lions bit and pushed me into the lake. I got bit in the lake until two crocodiles came to me and grabbed two of my legs. The three lions that pushed me into the lake grabbed my two feet at the front. They used me as a long rope playing buffalo war.

They were fighting like they were going to rip me into shreds. When the lions won me they dragged me out of the smelly lake they were smelling me. I was thinking that was really weird. I was thinking that I should run away but I didn’t because I thought that they would kill me if I try to run away. Then my herd came back for me. One lion just laid down and two of them jumped up and ran away to where they were first. The lion that just stayed almost got hit by my dad. But he is so lucky that he moved before my dad tried to get him. But when the lion moved he ran away to try to survive. My dad  ran to get the lion but the lion was lucky that he ran to his side.

But finally I feel safe around my herd. I am lucky to have a family like this.

By Siola