My space Chimp (Second Draft)

This is my presentation of my Space Chimp story.  W.A.L.T write a narrative I like this story that I have written, I hope you like it to. It is probably one of my best stories  If you want to say something don't be scared to leave a comment! Hope you enjoy! This is a story that I have made from this video on this slide that I have made my story. The video will be there at the end of the show.

                   

My next step is: I am trying to use other punctuation like apostrophes,colons, semi colons, ellipses. (brackets) ':;...( )