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Wednesday, October 17, 2018

Commitment

This term (term 4) we are focusing on commitment.

The question is:

What does commitment mean to me:
Commitment involves dedicating yourself to something like a person or a cause. Commitment is also about thinking carefully. A commitment obligates you to do something. 

What does it look like:
Commitment is a promise and a agreement to do something. An example for commitment is also trying and not giving up, like when you are in a test and you don't know what it means you can always ask for help instead of just sitting there and doing nothing.

Sounds like:
Commitment to me sounds like when everyone is positive. When an adult tells you to do something and you don't want to do it, you just have your head up and do it. Also when you have nothing to say good back to someone just bit your tongue and don't say anything. 

Feels like:
Commitment to me feels like when you are around people who are not doing anything nice you expectantly when they are bad language.

4 comments:

  1. Hi Siola, I really enjoyed ready your post, I also like how you broke it down and said, What does if mean to you, How it looks like to you, also what it sound like and how you feel. i think commitment is really important to everyone so im really glad that you posted this.

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  2. Hi Siola, its Summer. great blog post. I like how you have put what it sounds like and feels like. I love all the words you have used in this blog post. maybe next time you could read over your work because you have a bit of spelling mistakes, like you spelt expectantly instead of especially. Thanks Summer. :)

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    1. Hey Summer,
      Thanks for the feed back,I will try my best to fix it up.xx

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  3. Hey Siola, it's me Kiesha. I like your introduction which is short and simple. Also when I first looked and read your post it shows me and other people that you have been focusing on your work and your understanding of commitment is showed with your sentences. Something that needs to change is the word:expectantly which means your spelling was probably not checked or just missed out. Also as you wrote down on your post: What does commitment mean to me it sounds more like a question so you could add a question mark to make your punctuation correctly on. Anyway your post is very understanding with your writing and easy to read with your font and size. Keep up the awesome work Siola!!!!

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