Baby Blue Mia

How Does A Tornado Form?

How Does A Tornado Form?

In this slide show will talk about how tornadoes form, what is a tornadoes, what are some other factors for some tornadoes to form, what do tornadoes look like, what is a funnel cloud, and last how do tornadoes stop. Please comment down below. 

#1 please watch and read 👀
#2 think about the post 💬
#3 comment below 😏😊😄

The Lies and Truths I have Heard

I am proud of this piece of work because I wasn't managing my time well but then I got my work done.

My space Chimp (Second Draft)

This is my presentation of my Space Chimp story.  W.A.L.T write a narrative I like this story that I have written, I hope you like it to. It is probably one of my best stories  If you want to say something don't be scared to leave a comment! Hope you enjoy! This is a story that I have made from this video on this slide that I have made my story. The video will be there at the end of the show.

                   

My next step is: I am trying to use other punctuation like apostrophes,colons, semi colons, ellipses. (brackets) ':;...( )       

I Was Spent To Space (First Draft)

Success Criteria

I know I will be successful when….

• The title is suitable for the text.

• The orientation tells who the story is about, and when and where the story happened.
• The complication describes a problem and explains what happened next.
• The resolution explains how the problem was solved.
• Seeks feedback and makes changes to texts to improve clarity and meaning.

The Happy To Sad Chimpanzee

3, 2, 1, blast off!!!!  1961 the rocket was going to launch, I was terrified that I was on my own. I felt alone because my owner was leaving me. I heard my owner Jake say “start the countdown”. My heart was pounding like I was goIng to die. When I heard the rocket  launch I felt like the first chimp going to space. When I heard Blast off I was moved back  like there was a earthquake

underground.

When I got to space the only thing I heard was “Jack are you there”

I said “oooh aaaaa”

Then I heard a song called Sweet Mother.

He said “good luck Ju” and that was the last thing I heard from him.  When he left me I was falling asleep.  I was dreaming that I didn’t have to go to space and that I was back home with Jake…. I wish I wasn’t used for a science experiment.  

 65 years later

I woke up and said “why am I here?” and what am I doing here?”  I said “I thought that I was with Jake at home” My memory was coming back and I remember why I’m here. I was a test if I was going to survive. But lucky I survived. When I woke up  I saw like 500 stars around me. There was a milky way, and I saw the earth. When I saw earth I smiled and reached out to it. Suddenly I was heading to earth. I closed my eyes tightly as I can and it got bumpy. I was falling like I was going to crash but then………                              

Terra Firma!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I finally landed and I got out of the spaceship and I looked around to see if anyone was there.

I shouted Jake’s name and no one answered.

I was scared no one will come to help me.

Until I heard “ohhh aaaaa”.

When I heard that noise I was thinking it was Jake.

I ran to the noise because I thought it was Jake.

When I got there everyone was staring at me.

I thought that was Jake but it was 1000 chimpanzees staring at me.  

The leader said to me “Where do you come from?”. I said “I came from space” I said “Who are you?”  

He said “I ask the question around here.”

I asked him 1 more question I said “ Where are the humans that lived here?”

He said to  his slaves “grab him and take him to the dungeon”

I ran as fast as I can.

Thwacke

I gasped, the earth meet me on front.  A sharp pain burned in my back and I felt the sense of falling in and out of consciousness.

Darkness was coming.  But this time for eternity.   

My eyes caught a glimpse of something that seemed to take my pain away.  It was my photo.  But it was out of reach.  I used all of what I had left to reach it, and clutch it in my hands.

I unscrewed the faded photo……..   A slow smile grew on my face.  

“Sorry Ju!  Sorry!”

My Leaning Goals

These are my learning goals for 2016. In here will tell you about my goals I have met. And it will tell you about my goals that I am working on.

My Worst Day Ever (First Draft)

W.A.L.T recall  events through the eyes of an animal.

Success Criteria

I know I will be successful when my recount has a

• Title
• Orientation:  When? Who? Where? Why?
• Sequence of events:  What happened? Describe using the senses (hear, taste, see, smell and feel).
• Personal Comment:  How did the events make you feel?

First Draft

My Worst Day Ever

It was the best afternoon ever on July the 12th. My herd was walking to the amazing lake called Savanna Lake in Africa.  We went to the lake to drink water before the next walk.  I was playing with my two best friends called Jim and Max until Dad came and told me to stay with him.  When I went with my dad my friend's dad told their sons to stay with me too.  I was so glad that their dad  told them to stay with me. Luckily my dad told me to stay with him because I was about to meet my worst enemies. I was thinking about the day that I would hear and meet my worst enemy.  But then my dad saw a pride of lions so we ran away. When the lions saw us run away they started to chase our herd away. I was so frightened that I would die. The lions bit me and pushed me into the lake. I got my leg bitten in the lake until two crocodiles came to me and grabbed one of my legs. The three lions that pushed me into the lake grabbed my two feet at the front. They used me as a long rope playing buffalo war. When the lions got me  one held me and the two others smelled me. I was thinking that was really weird. Then my herd came back for me. One  lion just laid down and two of them ran away to there pride. The lion that just stayed almost got hit from my dad. But he is so lucky that he moved before my dad tried to get him. But when the lion moved he ran away to try and survive. My dad just ran to get it but the lion was just too fast for him.  So my dad just stopped. I felt terrified. But now I feel safe near my herd.

Finally I feel safe around my herd. I am lucky to have a family like this.  

Siola's Battle at Kruger Sequence

	The herd of buffalos have appeared in the lions home near the lake.
	The frightening lions are resting in the brown grass.
	Oh no the furious lions see the scrumptious buffalos so they start to chase them.
	The big buffalos start to run away because the lions are chasing them,  but instead of going for the big buffaloes the lions went for the baby calf.
	The lions are fighting with a crocodile for its food,  the lions are so annoyed because the lions got the delicious buffaloes.
	The lions are fighting with a crocodile for its food,  the lions are so annoyed because the lions got the delicious buffaloes.
	The buffalos come to save their baby calf because they know their baby calf was missing from their family.
	They start charging with the lions for their baby.
	The baby calf is struggling to come out.

Life For Women in WW1

W.A.L.T describe what life was like for men and women in WW1 through a diary entry.

28th July 1914

The days since you left have been miserable.

I have to wash the clothes and clean the house.

Oh how I have missed my brother Ted, I hope he's still alright.

I have to look after the kids and find food like apples and potatoes to make apple crumble for them to eat.

I have to work on the farm. I’m really worried about Ted joining the war.

I just want him safe at Gallipoli.  I want him to make friends to look after him and he look after them.

I hope Ted is alright, I just don’t want him to die.