(First Draft)

On the first week of school holidays my family and cousins drove to Omuru to see our dad’s side of our family.

While we drove there I put down my window and I saw some cows, horses, and some more cows. When we were going past them we had to put the window back up in our car because it stink like poo. After that I left the window up just in case.

When we felt hungry we stopped at the park to eat. The things that we ate were KFC, fruit, doritos, and some drinks. When I finished eating the stuff I had they were still eating. I went to my dad and asked “since you guys are still eating can I go and play on the playground?” He said  “yes but come back when I call you to come ok” So I ran and went on the flying fox. While I was going down the flying fox I was shouting “can someone come and play tag with me?” They all came and played but when they got there mum called out and said ”Come now we are going now” They said to me “ you called us at the wrong time” So we got in the van and started to drive again.

After that we continued our driving to Omuru. While we were driving we sang some songs like One dance, Flash light, and Cool down. After we sang the songs we all were thinking about watching a movie. The movie we picked was called Joyful Noise part 1 and 2.  So when we finished our movies we watched we arrived there on Saturday night.

When we got there on Saturday night I ran out to see my family that I haven’t seen like for 10 years.  We stayed at their home for the whole 2 weeks of school holidays. Finally when we were at their house we went to sleep because my family and cousins where tired from the trip.

I had a lot of fun with my family when we were going to Omuru. Next time I go there I would go to the pools and go to the movies.